Robert,
Some minor fixes:
197 <listitem>
198 <para>
199 <emphasis>Implement a truly serializable isolation
level</emphasis>
200 </para>
201 </listitem>
Should be:
<emphasis>Implement Serializable Snapshot Isolation, in order to provide
a more robust serializable transaction mode</emphasis>
212 <emphasis>Allow multiple collations to be used within a single
213 database</emphasis>
Should be:
Allow collations to be declared at the column level, permitting multiple
collations within a single database.
I agree that the sections you have are not ideal, but I don't think it's
necessary to fix them for an alpha release.
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