Kevin Grittner <kgrittn@gmail.com> writes:
> I'm not the greatest word-smith, but I'll attempt to rework Josh's
> draft to something that seems more "natural" to me.
Minor (or not?) comment:
> * To maintain a safe, respectful, productive and collaborative
> environment all participants must ensure that their language and
> actions are free of personal attacks and disparaging remarks of any
> kind.
The "disparaging remarks" part of this could easily be taken to forbid
technical criticism of any sort, eg "this patch is bad because X,Y, and
Z", even when X,Y, and Z are perfectly neutral technical points. "Of any
kind" doesn't improve that either. I'm on board with the "personal
attacks" part. Maybe "disparaging personal remarks" would be better?
regards, tom lane